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Hello, My name is Ella B and the reason I am writing this blog post is that I want to let you all know how it has been for my family and me, like how hard and easy it has been for me and my brothers you know like how it has been in the Covid19.
Me and my brothers Orum, Jobe, and Noah like to run and we don't have that much of a big back yard.
The Covid19 me and my brothers all say that the Covid19 sucks.
Now in this blog post, it will have its good bad news but first I want to tell you about how it has been.
So first umm... it has not gone so well my brothers and me keep on fighting this morning my brother Orum tried to hit me with a baseball bat it did give my leg a little bruise but I never noticed until my oldest brother Noah said: "Ella what happened to your leg?".
Now onto the good and bad news.
So let's start with the Good News.
So Good News?OOOH so I learned how to do a parani
a parani is when you do a cartwheel with no hand at the same time do a have spin but if you are god at doing it you do five whole spins as well as doing a cartwheel with no hands.
if only Makaraka school had tramp I could teach my class how to do a parani it would be amazing and fun...OH I have an idea why don't I ask my teacher if he could ask Mr. Swan if we could have a school tramp.
The End.
By Ella B.
Age eight.
Date: Wednesday, 15th April 2020
Me and my brothers Orum, Jobe, and Noah like to run and we don't have that much of a big back yard.
The Covid19 me and my brothers all say that the Covid19 sucks.
Now in this blog post, it will have its good bad news but first I want to tell you about how it has been.
So first umm... it has not gone so well my brothers and me keep on fighting this morning my brother Orum tried to hit me with a baseball bat it did give my leg a little bruise but I never noticed until my oldest brother Noah said: "Ella what happened to your leg?".
Now onto the good and bad news.
So let's start with the Good News.
So Good News?OOOH so I learned how to do a parani
a parani is when you do a cartwheel with no hand at the same time do a have spin but if you are god at doing it you do five whole spins as well as doing a cartwheel with no hands.
if only Makaraka school had tramp I could teach my class how to do a parani it would be amazing and fun...OH I have an idea why don't I ask my teacher if he could ask Mr. Swan if we could have a school tramp.
The End.
By Ella B.
Age eight.
Date: Wednesday, 15th April 2020
Hi Ella, well done posting some reflections on your experience of living in your bubble during Covid19. You did a great job in your first paragraph of introducing what you were writing about... the good news, the bad news and how it had been. This made me very interested to keep reading, and I wasn't disappointed as you described plenty of action (sorry about your leg though). Impressive progress in your gymnastic skills! Maybe you could learn a move to teach your friends that doesn't need a trampoline, although it would be fun to have one at school!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rachel that was the first comment I have ever had.:)
Deletegood work Ella this looks awesome! And we totally have a tramp! That would be great!
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